My first LP

[ai3rocks57]

My very first Large piece. How is it?

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i38/ai3rocks57/SpriteLPcopy.png

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[homerunhitter B]

That shiny metal thing you added looks really out of place. You can tell it was added in. Other than that I cant really help because I know nothing about these things.

EDIT: Fixed. Sorry my keyboard skills are not very good.

[ai3rocks57]

That shiny meatl thing you added looks really out of place. You can tell it was added in. Other than that I cant really help because I know nothing about these things.

What "shiny, meatl" thing?

[Tiffany]

I'm not sure what that is coming out of the water, but it looks super-imposed and is very distracting.

The sign that's got nothing on it, almost next to it is pretty distracting too.

Also, the entire sky is blown out.

The composition is pretty good... you just need to work on those little things that kins of make it not as good as it could be.

Try again, you'll get the hang of it.

[Nastazgeezer]

What "shiny, meatl" thing?

He means the sprite.. ;)

Oh, i see.. it's a game of spot the difference. :) Ok, i'll give it a shot..

# General image contrast & lighting
# Graffiti on the far back archways
# Birds in the sky

I can't find wally though.. =/

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/9/9f/WheresWaldo.jpg/180px-WheresWaldo.jpg

[ai3rocks57]

I'm not sure what that is coming out of the water, but it looks super-imposed and is very distracting.

The sign that's got nothing on it, almost next to it is pretty distracting too.

Also, the entire sky is blown out.

The composition is pretty good... you just need to work on those little things that kins of make it not as good as it could be.

Try again, you'll get the hang of it.

Thanks for the critique. I'll try to give those a shot on my next piece.
--
Nastaz; I swear Waldo will be in my next one ;)

[XxCAPiTAxX]

cool
good for a first :)